Chapter One
BASICS OF TECHNICAL
WRITING AND THESIS WRITING
This chapter will focus on the mechanics
on how to develop a thesis and made simple for easy understanding of the
processes. Many students are confronted with tasks that demand good writing skills.
They need guidance on haw to go about the complex job of writing a thesis or
dissertation. This chapter presents as a Guide for students.
Thesis Writing is subsumed under Technical
Writing. All professional fields require technical documents that help readers
perform tasks and understand specific tasks. As mentioned by some authors,
thesis is classified under technical writing as it provides vital information
to specific readers.
Technical Writing refers to the provision
of specific information to clearly identified readers who will use the
information for a specific purpose.
KEY
FEATURES OF TECHNICAL WRITING
Three
Elements of Technical Writing.
The elements are reader, purpose and
writing situation. The reader seeks information for a specific purpose. The
purpose is to design a document that will serve the reader's need and help the
reader understand the information efficiently. The writing situation consist of
both reader and purpose, as well as such factors as the sponsoring
organization's size, budget, ethics, deadlines, policies, competition and
priorities.
Three
General Stages of Technical Writing.
The stages are planning, multiple drafting
and revising and editing. Planning- a writer analyzes the reader, purpose and
writing situation; gathers information and tentatively organizes the document.
All these may recur many times during the writing.
Revising
and editing-
it takes place throughout the writing process but particularly after you have
begun drafting, read your draft and rethink the following elements: content- do
you need more facts? Are your facts relevant for the reader and purpose? Organization-
have you grouped the information into topics? Have you put the details in an
order that readers will find easy to understand and use? Headings- have you written
descriptive headings that will guide your readers to specific information?,
opening- does your opening establish the document purpose and introduce the
main topic? and closings does your closing provide a summary, offer recommendations
or suggest actions?, graphic aids- do you have enough visual aids to understand
the data'? are 'they appropriate?, language- have you used appropriate
language? too much technical jargon? have you define terms your readers may not
know? and reader usability- can your readers understand and use the information
effectively? does the document format help your reader find specific information?
After you are satisfied, then the final editing will focus on the form and
style like grammar, punctuation's ... and others. and finally proof reading.
Types
of Technical Writing.
This section would like to convey the
different types of technical writing in comparison to writing a thesis. Testing
these documents through the elements of writing: the reader, purpose and
situation The diversity in technical writing is there no matter what our jobs
are, we will have to communicate our technical knowledge to others both inside
and outside the organization.
Conventional
Reports/Project Ideas/Research Ideas- These reports may be written as informal
memos, letters, or long formal documents,
Executive
Summary Report.
It is a longer synopsis of one or two pages that provides a more comprehensive
overview than an abstract. Its purpose is to cover main points, conclusions, recommendations
and the impact of the subject. Readers use these synopses to orient themselves
to the main topics in a report before reading it completely. It looks like a
miniature report. It is difficult to write because they require summarizing in
a few words what a report covers in many pages. It should stand alone for
readers who don't intend to read the full text of the report. Example: The organization needs the
Renovation/Redesigning of a Hotel. Here are suggested information to be
included: background of the situation, major topics, significant details, major
conclusions or results, recommendations and a discussion how the subject can
affect the organization.
Incident
Report.
It provides information about accidents, equipment breakdowns or any disruptive
occurrence. Its purpose is to keep important records of an event that may use
the report in legal actions if injury or damage has occurred. It aids mangers
to help them prevent future accidents or disruptions. Example: The organization needs a report about an industrial fire,
which recently took place. It should include the following informations:
Description of the incidents, causes and recommendations.
Investigative
Report.
It analyzes data and seeks to answer to why something happens, how it happens
or what would happen under certain conditions. Its purpose is to summarize the
relevant data, analyzes the meaning of the data and assesses the potential
impact that the results will have on the organization or on specific research
questions. The sources of the data can include field studies, surveys,
observation and tests of products, people, opinions or events both inside and outside
the laboratory. Example: The
organization needs a report on an Airplane Crash. It should include: the
introduction, the methods used in the investigations, the results, the
discussion or interpretation of results and their conclusions.
Progress
Report. It
is also called the Status Report. It informs readers about the project that is
not completed. Its purpose is to provide information and it records the project
events for readers who are not involved in-day to- day operations. Example: Dam Repair Project. It should
include an introduction, work completed, work remaining, adjustments/problems
and conclusions.
Trip
Report.
It provides a record of a business trip or visit to the field. Its purpose is a
useful record both for the person who made the trip and for the decision-makers
that need information about the subjects discussed during the trip. It records
all significant information gathered either from meetings or from direct
observations. Example: A trip report on
a training system for a new, complicated software package. The report
should contain an introductory section, information section and conclusions and
recommendations.
Training
Design.
It's a project idea informing the reader on how a training could be
implemented. Its purpose is to further explain the different activities to be
taken up in a training program. Example:
A Seminar Workshop on Project Development. It should contain: Title of the
Training, Training Venue, Duration of the Training, the sponsor of the
training, Schedule/Activities, Evaluation Schemes, Methodology Management Team
and Estimated Budget.
Project
Proposal.
It suggests new ways to respond to specific company or organization situations,
or they suggest specific solutions to identified problems. It may be internal
(written by employee to readers within the company) or external (written from
one company to another or from an individual to an organization). The purpose
is to suggest a solution to a company problem. It persuades readers that it is
practical, efficient and cost effective and suits company or research goals. Example: Safety methods of installing
portable generators during rain storms. This should include information's
on: the problem, proposed solutions, needed equipment/personnel, schedules,
budget; evaluation system, expected benefits and summary/conclusions.
Feasibility
Study.
It provides information to decision makers about the practicality and potential
success of several alternative solutions to a problem. Its purpose is to
identify all reasonable options and prepares a report that evaluates cost,
reliability, time constraints, and organization goals. It provides the information
necessary to make an informed choice among alternatives. Example: Relocation of a company to a new city. Information to be
included is: introduction, comparison of alternatives, conclusions and
recommendations.
Thesis
Writing.
It is a scholarly made technical report because logical and intensive research
is undertaken. It provides information to readers about a topic which are based
on theories and later translated into practical application or action
intervention to organizations, groups or individual concerns. Example: “A Study on the Leadership
Behaviors and Development Performance of Municipal Mayors: An Assessment"
KEY FEATURES OF THESIS WRITING
Definition
of a Thesis
A Thesis is an idea or theory that is
expressed as a statement, a contention for which evidence is gathered and
discussed logically (Anderson and Poole, 1998). It normally represents the
culmination of a substantial piece of original work over a period of at least
one year.
Purpose
of a Thesis
A Thesis involves an academic study, experiment,
invention, or development of a (formula, application, methodology, theory,
idea, etc ... ) It is considered to be an original or a major enhancement to
the existing one. The Thesis must include a literature survey providing
background on, the past and recent developments on the thesis subject. It is
conducted to replicate previous research or testing the relevance of findingd
of research completed in a different milieu. Other research builds on existing
studies to follow up new leads or to redefine or qualify the findings of
earlier studies. The thesis is expected to make an original contribution to
knowledge.
Thesis writing is a demanding and
challenging work for students as it unfolds and is gratifying once it is
finished. It is a tough test for intelligence and endurance.
The Research Process.
The
Research Wheel
Steps
of the Research Process. It involves the following process:
1. Empirical Observation - the entry
points is an infinite array of possible topics.
2.
Proposition - the inductive logic serves to relate specific topic to a broader
context and begins with hunches" I wonder if'. Developed proposition are
established relationships, it exist within a conceptual/theoretical framework.
3.
Conceptual Framework- it consist of statements that link abstract concepts to
empirical data. A Theory allows us to move from observation to observation and
make sense of similarities and differences.
4.
Research Questions and Hypothesis - basing from the conceptual framework, the questions
and hypothesis could be formed.
5.
Data Collection - this refers to the gathering of information relevant to the
subject under study.
6.
Data Analysis - data collected are analyzed and the results/findings are
interpreted as bases for further action and decision making.
Nature
and Limitations of a Thesis.
Authorities have reached no absolute
agreement regarding details of form in thesis writing. In a any particular
situation, several forms may be acceptable. Some universities require students
to follow special forms quite different from those elsewhere. An example: A
department of sociology at the same university requires students to use a
particular referencing technique that would not be acceptable to the department
of history at the same university. Regardless of a particular system adapted,
the students may have the option to choose which ever is applicable in their study.
PRACTICAL
GUIDE IN THE SELECTION OF A THESIS TOPIC
Criteria
in Choosing a Thesis Title.
The following are some recommended
criteria in the selection of a title: Using personal experience for topic
discovery -reflect on your personal experiences for a topic that touches your
life-style or career; Talking with others to find a subject - talk with other
people because collaborative learning can broaden your vision of the issues.
Speculating about your subject to discover ideas - speculate about the subject
and discover ideas by listing issues, asking questions, free writing and other
techniques.
Three
Demands for a Research Paper
It must examine a significant issue; It
must address a knowledgeable reader and carry that reader to another plateau of
knowledge; It must have a serious purpose, one that demands analysis of the issues,
argues from a position, and explains complex details.
Characteristics
of a Good Thesis Research Problem
According to (Anderson, 1990), there are
ten important characteristics of a good research problem for a thesis:
The Problem can be stated clearly and
concisely. It is tested by writing into a concise sentence or paragraph and to
share it with others; The problem generates research questions. It refers to
the formulation of specific questions which represents the various aspects of
the problem; It is grounded in theory. Good problems have theoretical and
or/conceptual frameworks for their analysis. It relates to the specifics of
what is being investigated to a more general background of theory which helps
the results and link it to the field; It relates to one or more academic
disciplines. It should be based on disciplines like sociology, psychology or
management science to have clear links to one or two disciplines; It has a base
in the research literature. It often relates to a well defined body of
literature written by a selected group and published in journals to establish
connections; It has potential significance or importance. The problem must have
importance to the researcher and the others as well; It is do-able within the
time frame and budget. Logistic factors are needed to carry out the thesis;
Sufficient data are available or can be obtained. Data to address the problem
should be accessible. There may be some restrictions on the environment and
some other factors; The researcher's methodological strengths can be applied to
the problem. Some problems are related to standard methodology. The researcher
should have the inclination towards the methodology to be used; The problem is
new; it is not already answered sufficiently. Ones the field is known, it
becomes clear what has been done and what needs to be done.
Chapter Two
PRELIMINARIES OR FRONT MATTERS
This chapter presents the chronological
Parts of a Thesis and its Contents. It would contain the title page, approval
sheet, executive summary, abstract, acknowledgments, table of contents, list of
tables and list of figures.
THE
PRELIMINARIES OR FRONT MATTER OF A THESIS
This is the front matter of the thesis. It
includes the following:
Thesis
Title Page.
It is usually the first page of the Thesis
It includes the following: Title: It should be a concise statement of the main
topic and should identify the actual variables or theoretical issues under
investigation and the relationship between them. It should be fully explanatory
when standing alone. The recommended length for a title is from 10 to 12 words.
It is centered at the top third of the page. Most universities and colleges
have their own style of title page for theses, and this should follow exactly
in matters of content, capitalization, centering and spacing.Author's name and
institutional affiliation: The preferred author's name is first name, middle
initial and last name because this reduces the likelihood of mistaken identity.
Use the same fonn for publication throughout your career; that is, do not use
initials on one manuscript and the full name on a later one. Determining
whether Laura A. Lintao is the same person as L. A. Lintao, or L. Lintao can be
difficult, particularly when citations span several years and institutional
affiliations change. The affiliation identifies the location where the author
conducted the investigation, which is usually an institution. It is centered at
the middle of the page; name, title and company/school of the writer, centered
at the bottom third of the page and date of the research/report, centered
directly below the writer's name. The title page is not listed in the table of
contents but it is counted as page i.
ii.
Committee Approval Sheet.
It is the page where the members of the
Committee of the Oral Defense sign and where the rating of the thesis is to be
indicated.
iii
An Executive Summary.
It would enable the readers to view the
entire thesis work at a glance in one page (in two or more pages in spreadsheet
form). It consist of three main parts namely: thesis problem, research
methodology and Results. The thesis problem must consist of the situation and
the research problem. The situation presents in brief the global reality,
national reality and the local reality in relation to the study. The research
problem presents the research objecties, the research questions and hypotheses.
The research methodology should mention briefly the conceptual framework of the
study (in graphic format). It shows the independent and dependent variables,
research methods used, target population and sample respondents, sampling
procedures, data collection procedures and statistical treatment of data. The
Results should include the summary findings, conclusions and recommendations.
iv.
An Abstract.
It is a brief: comprehensive summary of
the contents of the study. It allows readers to survey the contents of a study
quickly. A well-prepared abstract can be the most important paragraph of the
study. It is a synopsis of the most important points in a report and provides
readers with a preview of the full contents. It can be specified in 200 words.
It can be either be descriptive or informative. A descriptive abstract names
the topics covered in a research without revealing details about those topics
while informative abstract is frequently used for formal reports and technical
articles, describes the major subjects in the report and summarizes the
conclusions and recommendations. It includes more details and gives a more
complete synopsis of the report contents than the descriptive does. It consists
of a short statement of the problem, a brief description of the methods and
procedures adopted and a condensed summary of the findings of the study.
v.
Acknowledgments.
Citations accorded to the persons who in
one way or another had helped in the realization of the study. This includes
names of individuals or companies/agencies whom the researcher was indebted to
such as reading materials, facilities used or financial support to the
researcher.
vi.
Table of Contents.
It alerts the reader to pages that contain
specific topics, the overall organization and content of the research and
specific and supplemental materials such as appendixes. All front matter for a
thesis paper is numbered in small Roman numerals. The first page of the thesis
proper is numbered as page 1 in Arabic numbers, and all pages after will have
Arabic numbers.
vii.
List of Tables.
The list of tables appears directly after
the list of figures. List each table by number and title and indicate page
numbers. In a list of tables, the table numbers (in Arabic, followed by a
period) are placed in a column flush left under the heading "Table,"
and the page numbers are listed flush right under the heading "Page."
The table titles should begin two spaces after the period following the table
number and should agree exactly with the wording of the titles as they appear
above the tables themselves. The titles are capitalized in either sentence or
headline style, and run over lines are indented three spaces. Double -space
between items, single-space within.
viii.
List of Figures.
Any graphic aid, such as bar graph, map or
flowchart that is not a table with numbers or words in columns is called a
figure. The list of figures follows the table of contents. List each figure by
both number and title and indicate page numbers. The figure numbers in tile
list are aligned by their periods under the word "Figure" and page
numbers are listed flush right under the word "Page," Captions are
capitalized headline syle.
Chapter Three
GENERALIES OF THE STUDY
The following are the suggested parts and
contents of the Thesis as outlined below: A few form and style was introduced
(such as center and side headings) to guide the readers how to go on into the
formulation of the different chapters of the thesis.
CHAPTER
1
GENERALITIES
OF THE STUDY
1.1
Introduction of the Study
In paragraph form this section includes
the following information: 1. Global
Context this portion describes the situation associated in the global
context of the study, in general the world situation. How does your study link
with the current problems of today. does the research focus on groups,
organization or an individual. 2.
National Context - state how the" country or nation is currently
experiencing the present problem which your study has some kind of relatedness.
3. Local Context- state how the
study relates or relevance to the area in focus. 4. Overview/history of the Organization (subject of the study)-
make brief statements for the company; it should also include in brief some
information on the main topics of the study of which the organization is a
focus.
1.2
Research Objectives
In paragraph form, this refers to the general objective of the study, It
simply indicates the intent or purpose why the study is conducted. It must be
stated in declarative sentences or in operational terms what the research
sought to achieve: what to find out?
to determine ... , to identify ... ,to
assess .... Follow the SMART Formula.
SMART means S-specific, M-measurable, A-attainable, R-realistic and T- time
bounded.
1.3
Statement of the Problem
In question form, the research must have
an explanatory basis. It should contain a brief summary of the conceptual
underpinnings of the proposed research. This section calls for very specific
questions to be answered based from the objectives. It is the most critical
part as it seeks to ask what are the researchable areas of the study. It must
be stated in interrogative sentences or statements. In one major question, it
can have two or more follow-up questions. The questions should synchronized
with the variables as presented in the conceptual framework.
1.4
Scope of the Research
In
paragraph form, include the following information: Topic in focus- state the
different main variables of the study. State what are the main independent and
dependent variables; Target respondents- state who are your main respondents.
Are they Managers? Employees? or Middle Managers? The area in focus- refers to
the coverage of the study whether it is nationwide, regional or provincial or
district wide where the subjects can be located.
1.5
Limitations of the Research
It implies limitations on the research
design that you have deliberately imposed. It restricts the population to which
the results of the study can be generalized. Limitations refer to the
restrictions over which you have no control. The extent/or magnitude to which
the study as to what topics or concerns. What can not be done ... or to be
done.
1.6
Significance of the Study
This part should explain what is the
relevance or usefulness of the study. Who would be benefited. What importance
does it generates for certain individual, groups or organization. It would
address the 3 W's (what, who and why) plus how?
1.7
Definition of Terms
This section would inform us about terms,
which are either in operational terms or literal meanings to express clarity
and correct understanding of some terms not familiar with the readers. It
should contain a brief and concise definitions about two or three sentences. It
should define all terms, which are presented in the conceptual framework. and
other relevant terms included in the discussion of the text.
Chapter Four
REVIEW OF LITERATURE RELATED AND STUDIES
This chapter will discuss the different
parts and contents of chapter 2 of the thesis. The following are outlined which
provides a context for proposed study and demonstrates why it is important and
timely. It needs to clarify the relationship between the proposed study and
previous work conducted on the topic. It can assume that you form a dialogue
between you and the reader. To challenge effectively, you could ask, "What
is your point here? So what? You could answer "yes" this is the exact
study to be done at this time to move knowledge in this field or little further
along the same subject.
It is a coherent argument that leads to
the description of a proposed study. According to the Venn Diagram, collect
literature and studies which are very relevant, relevant and background
literature and studies as related to your study. It includes both foreign and
local literature and studies. It would show or build arguments either the study
has similar observations or results; it would also contrast or argue on some
points with respect to some literature or studies which was conducted by
various writers, academicians or practitioners.
Words that describes
similarities/differences are: supports, presents, confirmed, illustrates,
shares, positive relationships, revealed, pointed, argued, concluded, negative relationships
and contrasting results. It is necessary to show how the problem under
investigation relates to previous research studies. It is important to locate
the problem within a theoretical framework and in such cases the theory' needs
to be reviewed as well. It would give the researcher a wider range of ideas as
to similarities in the studies, which will contribute to the conceptualization
of the research paradigm. This chapter should include the following
information:
Chapter Five
RESEARCH FRAMEWORKS
The chapter will discuss the topics of
Research Frameworks, the theoretical framework, the conceptual framework,
research hypothesis and operationalization of the variables. This chapter of
the thesis will include the following:
CHAPTER
III
RESEARCH
FRAMEWORKS
Brief introduction of the chapter- in a
paragraph form, specify what would be the content of this chapter.
3.1
Theoretical Framework
The Theoretical Framework refers to the
theories being used as a basis or reference for the study which are drawn from
the literature. The big ideas of the authors or theorist, experts and
specialist. It is the big map of ideas in global terms.
A framework is a model, which allow the
researcher to explore the relationship of variables in a logical and prescribed
fashion. It clarifies questions and it summarizes the overall concept being
investigated
It should include the following information:
Link here the theories and studies which you patterned your conceptual
framework; Show specific models which you think most of the variables are
taken; Write the main variable and its sub variables and summarized the authors
plus year whose theory is included.
3.2
Conceptual Framework
It is the specific map of ideas of your
topic or study. In here, the researcher has to explain the research framework
(model) together with the explanation of the variables. It
is a framework which students designed/
conceptualized for the specific needs and issue of the study. The development
of a suitable framework is part of a process of planning and clarifying the
research problem and conducting the analysis.
There are different kinds of frameworks
which are popularly used by research students: One - dimensional framework. The starting point for the research is
often the formulation of a one-dimensional framework. Most common was the
pre-test-post test experiment. Something is measured before an educational
intervention and again afterwards. Another example: Input-process-output model.
It is popularly known as the Black box model; Two-dimensional frameworks. It
permits analysis of the interrelationships between sets of related variables.
It is formed by dividing the data sample into groups with same characteristics.
It would suggest various types of inputs, which bear logical relationships to
components of institutional development; The Logical Framework Analysis (LFA)
Design. It is a design used by USAID. It provides a structure for project
planning and evaluation research. ·It is essentially a planning and evaluation
model which contains 16 cells ( 4 x 4 table). The rational part of the model is
its Logic. The various cells are interrelated in the vertical dimension and
also interrelated horizontally; Another type was the Logical Framework Analysis
type designed by the Germans. It is also based on logic. It shows the rational
or logical way of analyzing problems through the "decision tree
model" It shows the cause and effect relationship of things. The causes
are the independent variables and the effect is the dependent variables. The
path analysis and three some variable frameworks are also other frameworks to
choose from for any suitable kind of study.
This part of the thesis is the most vital
and critical part as this will form the basis of the conceptual part of the
research.
A research paradigm can be conceptualized
as patterned from the theoretical framework. Example: A study on the leadership
behavior and development performance of the Expatriates in Thailand.
It should include the following
information: Present your conceptual framework showing the independent and
dependent variables; Discuss in brief the main variables and sub-variables and
which theoy are they patterned.
3.3
Research Hypothesis
A Hypothesis is a claim or statement either
about a value of a single population characteristics or about the values of
several characteristics.
A test of hypothesis is a method for
deciding which of the two contradictory claims is the correct one. In carrying
out a test, we initially assume that a particular one of the two is the correct
one. This claim will be rejected in favor of the second (alternative) claim if
sample evidence is incompatible with the initial assumption.
The null hypothesis, denoted by Ho, is the
claim that is initially assumed to be true. The other hypothesis is referred as
the alternative hypothesis and is denoted as Ha. In carrying out a test of Ho
versus Ha, the hypothesis Ho will be rejected in favor of Ha only if sample
evidence strongly suggests that Ho will not be rejected.
How are hypothesis stated? Hypothesis
should synchronize with those asked in the statement of the problems
particularly focusing on the relationship of variables.
It should include the following
information: List all the statements/hypotheses which you wanted to prove in
the study. Which hypothesis should be tested? There are only two hypotheses
that can be statistically tested-the hypothesis of difference and the
hypothesis of association. Whenever the research is experimental, then the
hypothesis of difference is the one that must be tested. This hypothesis states
that the populations from which the sample groups have been selected are in
some way different from each other. If however the research is post facto, then
the hypothesis under scrutiny might be one of either difference or association;
The hypothesis of association states that a correlation exists in the population
from which the sample has been selected. The correlation may exist between
different measures taken on the same group of Subjects (for example, a single
group of subjects being measured on both height and weight) or between the same
measure taken on different subjects (for example, obtaining IQ scores from
pairs of identical twis). Testing the hypothesis of association requires
different statistical tests than does testing the hypothesis of difference.
If the Hypothesis of Difference has been
tested, are the samples independent or correlated? Whenever the hypothesis of
difference is tested, whether in experimental or post facto research, it must
clearly determined whether the sample groups are independent or correlated. If
the selection of one sample is in no way influenced by the selection of
another, then the samples are independent. This occurs when each sample is
randomly selected. If on the other hand, the subjects to be measured are in any
way paired oft: either by using the same subject more than once or by equating
subjects on the basis of some relevant variable then the groups are correlated.
Attempting to isolate differences between correlated sample measures requires
different statistical tests than when analyzing differences between independent
sample measures.
3.4
Operationalization of the Independent and Dependent Variables
It should include the following
information: Give an example how to translate into action your different
sub-variables for the main independent variable. (in statement form similar to
that of the questionnaire); Give an example how to translate into action your
different sub-variables for the main dependent variable. (in satement form
similar to that of the questionnaire).